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author | Michael S. Tsirkin <mst@redhat.com> | 2019-03-08 00:39:55 -0500 |
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committer | Michael S. Tsirkin <mst@redhat.com> | 2019-03-21 13:24:59 -0400 |
commit | 90047f57b2a791e850f656411d77e6fcda7aca3f (patch) | |
tree | 2154336e9fd1facf8a810f4aa31ea1ef347b342c /content.tex | |
parent | 22d214b5f8925e9e3173588ce1a4827a5fec96e2 (diff) | |
download | virtio-spec-90047f57b2a791e850f656411d77e6fcda7aca3f.tar.gz |
format: replace "- i.e." with ", i.e.,"
This seems to be preferred by native speakers, and
seems just as effective as a sentence device.
Fixes: https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/VIRTIO-171
Signed-off-by: Michael S. Tsirkin <mst@redhat.com>
Reviewed-by: Stefan Hajnoczi <stefanha@redhat.com>
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1 files changed, 6 insertions, 6 deletions
diff --git a/content.tex b/content.tex index ede0ef6..4180296 100644 --- a/content.tex +++ b/content.tex @@ -277,15 +277,15 @@ virtqueues\footnote{For example, the simplest network device has one virtqueue f transmit and one for receive.}. Driver makes requests available to device by adding -an available buffer to the queue - i.e. adding a buffer +an available buffer to the queue, i.e., adding a buffer describing the request to a virtqueue, and optionally triggering -a driver event - i.e. sending an available buffer notification +a driver event, i.e., sending an available buffer notification to the device. Device executes the requests and - when complete - adds -a used buffer to the queue - i.e. lets the driver +a used buffer to the queue, i.e., lets the driver know by marking the buffer as used. Device can then trigger -a device event - i.e. send a used buffer notification to the driver. +a device event, i.e., send a used buffer notification to the driver. Device reports the number of bytes it has written to memory for each buffer it uses. This is referred to as ``used length''. @@ -489,8 +489,8 @@ of a device are live once the device has been reset. \drivernormative{\subsection}{Device Cleanup}{General Initialization And Device Operation / Device Cleanup} -A driver MUST NOT alter virtqueue entries for exposed buffers - -i.e. buffers which have been +A driver MUST NOT alter virtqueue entries for exposed buffers, +i.e., buffers which have been made available to the device (and not been used by the device) of a live virtqueue. |