From 1a6406d93270b943f7181c141e3e7ec10db6a7dd Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: "Michael S. Tsirkin" <mst@redhat.com>
Date: Fri, 11 Jan 2019 17:09:10 -0500
Subject: edit: address comments by Paul Knight

Several changes will be needed to the documents prepared by the TC:

- date should be set to "20 December 2018" in subtitle, page footers, and
citation format
- "Previous version" should just show "N/A" instead of URIs from v1.0-cs04
(this is a new Version)
-  use "https" instead of http for all URIs for this specification. (including
citation format)
-  insert actual stage name - "csprd01" instead of "wd12122018" in all of the URIs
-  replace "Working Draft" with "Committee Specification Draft 01 / Public
Review Draft 01" in subtitle and in Citation format text.
-  change the "title" attribute/tag in the HTML file to be "Virtual I/O Device
(VIRTIO) Version 1.1" instead of "... Version 1.0"
-  add reference to VIRTIO v1.0 in the "Related work" section, similar to the
0.9.5 reference (replaces or supersedes) - (Virtual I/O Device (VIRTIO) Version
1.0. Edited by Rusty Russell, Michael S. Tsirkin, Cornelia Huck, and Pawel
Moll. Latest version: http://docs.oasis-open.org/virtio/virtio/v1.0/
virtio-v1.0.html.) - copied from v1.0-cs04 citation format block, with specific
stage removed
- set the copyright year to be 2018. (in "Notices" and in page footers (PDF))
- in "Citation format" only list the currently identified Editors - Michael S.
Tsirkin and Cornelia Huck (or add other names into "Editors" list near top)
- change "Chairs" to "Chair" near top
- add the new IPR Policy text in the Status section and as Section 1.1 in the
body (details below)
- add the note on machine-readable content as the fourth paragraph in Status
section (details below)

Paragraph 3 of Status section AND Section 1.1 of the specification body "1.1
IPR Policy":   <visible text><hyperlink>

This specification is provided under the <Non-Assertion><https://
www.oasis-open.org/policies-guidelines/ipr#Non-Assertion-Mode> Mode of the
<OASIS IPR Policy><https://www.oasis-open.org/policies-guidelines/ipr>, the
mode chosen when the Technical Committee was established. For information on
whether any patents have been disclosed that may be essential to implementing
this specification, and any offers of patent licensing terms, please refer to
the Intellectual Property Rights section of the TC's web page (<https://
www.oasis-open.org/committees/virtio/ipr.php><https://www.oasis-open.org/
committees/virtio/ipr.php>).

Paragraph 4 of Status section:

Note that any machine-readable content (<Computer Language Definitions><https:/
/www.oasis-open.org/policies-guidelines/tc-process#wpComponentsCompLang>)
declared Normative for this Work Product is provided in separate plain text
files. In the event of a discrepancy between any such plain text file and
display content in the Work Product's prose narrative document(s), the content
in the separate plain text file prevails.

Signed-off-by: Michael S. Tsirkin <mst@redhat.com>
---
 specvars.tex | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

(limited to 'specvars.tex')

diff --git a/specvars.tex b/specvars.tex
index 84f8bae..8cecf6f 100644
--- a/specvars.tex
+++ b/specvars.tex
@@ -1,17 +1,17 @@
 \input{setup-generated.tex}
 \newcommand{\virtioversion}{Virtual I/O Device (VIRTIO) Version \virtiorev}
 \newcommand{\virtiospecfile}{virtio-v\virtiorev-\virtiodraftstage\virtioworkingdraft}
-\newcommand{\virtiourlbase}{http://docs.oasis-open.org/virtio/virtio/v\virtiorev/\virtiodraftstage\virtioworkingdraft}
+\newcommand{\virtiourlbase}{https://docs.oasis-open.org/virtio/virtio/v\virtiorev/\virtiodraftstage\virtioworkingdraft}
 %Below must be used to make links work correctly in HTML
 \urldef \virtiourllistings\url{\virtiourlbase/listings/}
 \urldef \virtiourltex\url{\virtiourlbase/tex/}
 \urldef \virtiourlpdf\url{\virtiourlbase/\virtiospecfile.pdf}
 \urldef \virtiourlhtml\url{\virtiourlbase/\virtiospecfile.html}
 \urldef \virtiourlh\url{\virtiourlbase/listings/virtio_queue.h}
-\urldef \virtiourllatestpdf\url{http://docs.oasis-open.org/virtio/virtio/v\virtiorev/virtio-v\virtiorev.pdf}
-\urldef \virtiourllatesthtml\url{http://docs.oasis-open.org/virtio/virtio/v\virtiorev/virtio-v\virtiorev.html}
+\urldef \virtiourllatestpdf\url{https://docs.oasis-open.org/virtio/virtio/v\virtiorev/virtio-v\virtiorev.pdf}
+\urldef \virtiourllatesthtml\url{https://docs.oasis-open.org/virtio/virtio/v\virtiorev/virtio-v\virtiorev.html}
 \newcommand{\virtioworkproduct}{Standards Track Work Product}
-\newcommand{\virtiooasiscopyright}{Copyright © OASIS Open 2015. All Rights Reserved.}
+\newcommand{\virtiooasiscopyright}{Copyright © OASIS Open 2018. All Rights Reserved.}
 
 % PDF setup
 \hypersetup{
-- 
cgit 

